tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3387495443226852794.post8201637974182615890..comments2024-03-29T23:24:51.650+11:00Comments on The Adventurers Guild: Dune - The Demolished DukeThe Tricksterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01419316208187255801noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3387495443226852794.post-42281554181004528602017-04-28T02:03:20.118+10:002017-04-28T02:03:20.118+10:00ROFL, I just got the part where Chani falls in lov...ROFL, I just got the part where Chani falls in love with you and it's so hilariously badly written. They barely know each other, and then:<br /><br />"It's so good to be near you... I... uh... I think I've fallen in love with you, Paul. I want to be with you every day."<br /><br />This is NOT how to write a romance. Maybe it's more believable in the books, and based on Reiko's words it may indeed be.Laukkuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16258625692586860655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3387495443226852794.post-69478451854421637692017-04-17T02:53:05.112+10:002017-04-17T02:53:05.112+10:00That's right!That's right!Reikohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07326356159794723662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3387495443226852794.post-55909215908255565812017-04-16T23:57:32.741+10:002017-04-16T23:57:32.741+10:00The book is The Demolished Man by Alfred BesterThe book is The Demolished Man by Alfred BesterAdamantnoreply@blogger.com